- A discussion with Miss Campbell about your behavior
"How do you think your behavior has been this year?"
"Umm Alright, I guess." I replied slowly
"Well, the school has decided to do a behavior check on all of the students." "I have given you a 7/10"
"What really? Thats awesome." I replied back happily
"Well you should be proud of that score"
"Trust me I am"
-Mrs Mills speaking to us about the year 8 final assembly
"The final assembly is coming up, and I want you to be on your best behavior."
"All of your parents will be there and I don't want to be disappointed."
murmur from the students had filled the room
"Silence, you need to understand how important this"
"All of the teachers and Mr Diver will be watching out for idiots"
"So, do you all understand?"
"YES!" replied all of the rimu year 8's
Well done! I though it was really good but there was one mistake was when you closed the speech marks and then you opened them for the same person but it was really good.
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