I am a Year 8 student at Tauranga Intermediate School in New Zealand. I am in Rm42 and my teacher is Miss Campbell.
It was really good you described all the moves really well. But it was really long. The sound effects were cool though.
Nice work, love the addition of the music, and the planning is obvious. Just too long.
It was really good you described all the moves really well. But it was really long. The sound effects were cool though.
ReplyDeleteNice work, love the addition of the music, and the planning is obvious. Just too long.
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